There are many people I’d like to thank:
Adrienne Dines for helping with early direction. My first readers: Jo Barker-Scott, Louise Taylor, Henry Ayling, India Fuller Ayling and Tim Chapman. All those who have given such constructive feedback on this book in the St James Tavern, including Amanda Oosthuizen, Sarah Wells, Rebecca Lyon, Natasha Orme and Kate Patrick. All the Friday Fictioneers, past, present and future. The lovely people at Lutyens & Rubinstein, especially Juliet Mahony, and Jane Finigan for her support and enthusiasm. Everyone at Penguin and Fig Tree, including Anna Steadman and Poppy North, and in particular my fine and straight-talking editor, Juliet Annan. Caroline Pretty for catching my mistakes. Masie Cochran for her eagle-eyed advice, and all the rest of the wonderful team at Tin House, including Nanci McCloskey, Sabrina Wise, Erika Stevens and Allison Dubinsky. Diane Chonette for her amazing jacket design. Isabel Rogers for her cockerel-wrangling know-how. Tommy Geddes for advice on 1970s university administration. Angela Lam for help with research on childbirth in the 1970s. Jill Kershaw for her patience with my medical questions. Matt Holt for Morris Minor information. Ursula Pitcher, Stephen Fuller and Heidi Fuller for their love and support. And Townes Van Zandt for my writing soundtrack.
Our Endless Numbered Days
The ringing woke Flora from a deep sleep. Richard, lying next to her, had a pillow over his head, so she climbed across him and out into the cold and gloomy room. She stepped over the debris of clothes, empty bottles and dirty plates on the floor, picked up an old tablecloth which she kept on the sofa to hide the greasy stains left by the previous tenants, and wrapped it around her like a cloak. The ringing stopped. Flora sighed, and at the end of her out-breath the ringing started again. She listened and then rummaged through the clothes until she found her jeans with her mobile phone in the pocket. Nan, the display said. Richard rolled over in the bed with a groan and Flora went through to the bathroom.
‘Nan?’ she said, pulling the light cord and wincing at the glare.
‘Hello? Flora?’
‘Oh God, I’m so sorry,’ Flora said. ‘I should have called. Happy birthday for yesterday.’
‘Thanks,’ Nan said, ‘but I’m not calling about that.’ Her tone was urgent, worried, and a creature uncoiled itself inside Flora’s stomach.
‘What is it?’ Flora’s voice was a whisper. She sank on to the lino, slotting herself between the bath and the basin’s pedestal. Close up, the abstract swirls and eddies embroidered on the tablecloth transformed themselves into silvery-blue fish swimming over her knees.
‘What?’ Nan said. ‘I can’t hear you properly. The reception’s terrible. Flora? Hello?’ Nan’s voice was too loud. ‘It’s about Dad,’ she shouted.
‘Daddy?’ Flora said, her mind already spinning towards all the possible scenarios.
‘There’s no need to worry immediately, but . . .’
‘What?’
‘He’s had an accident.’
‘An accident? What? When?’
‘I can’t hear you,’ Nan said.
Flora stood up, stepped into the bath and opened the window on to the gap below ground level. It was dark outside, confusingly dark. A blast of wind blew in, and above her shapes of trees and shrubs thrashed back and forth. ‘Is that better?’
‘That’s better,’ Nan said, still shouting. ‘Dad fell off the promenade in Hadleigh. Cuts and bruises, concussion maybe, a sprained wrist. Nothing serious . . .’
‘Nothing serious – are you sure? Should I come now?’
‘. . . or maybe he jumped,’ Nan continued.
‘Jumped?’
‘No, don’t come now.’
‘Off the promenade?’
‘Flora, do you have to repeat everything I say?’
‘Well, tell me then!’
‘Are you drunk?’
‘Of course not,’ Flora said, although she may still have been.
‘Or stoned? Are you stoned?’
An unexpected laugh bubbled out of Flora. ‘No one says stoned any more, Nan. It’s high.’
‘So you’re high.’
‘I was asleep,’ Flora said. ‘Tell me! What’s happened?’
‘Have you just got up? It’s nine thirty in the evening, for goodness’ sake.’ Nan sounded outraged.
‘In the evening?’ Flora said. ‘Isn’t it morning?’
Nan tutted and Flora could imagine her sister shaking her head.
‘I was up all last night,’ Flora said. She had no intention of telling Nan that she and Richard had stayed in bed for the past two days. That twice Flora had pulled on jeans and a jumper and run to the shop on the Stockbridge Road to buy another couple of bottles of wine, a lump of plastic Cheddar, sliced white bread, baked beans and chocolate. Richard had offered to go, but Flora needed those ten minutes away from him. When she returned and let herself in through the basement door, she dropped the bags and her jeans, and climbed back under the covers.
‘Doing what?’ Nan said. ‘Oh, Flora, you’re not late with an essay, are you?’
‘Are you in the hospital? Can I speak to him?’
‘He’s sleeping. Flora, there are a couple of other things.’ Her sister sniffed and rustled as if wiping her nose, and then took a deep breath. ‘He told me he saw Mum outside the bookshop in Hadleigh, wearing his old greatcoat, the one you used to dress up in, and that he followed her down to the breakwater boulders.’
Adrenalin rushed through Flora, like a wave surging out from her centre to her limbs, the ends of her fingers, and up to her head. ‘Mum? In Hadleigh?’ The scent of coconut came to her, inextricably linked with the colour of golden honey, sweet and clean from amongst the thorns and dying flowers of gorse.
‘He didn’t though,’ Nan said. ‘He just thought he did. It’s probably his age or the concussion.’
‘Yes,’ Flora whispered. The wind splattered rain at her, and she ducked back inside the bathroom, leaning towards the window to keep the phone signal strong.
‘Flora, are you still there?’ Nan said into her ear.
‘Still here,’ Flora said. ‘I’m coming to the hospital. I’ll pack a bag and get the next train.’
‘No, don’t do that. Dad’s sleeping. I was hoping they might discharge him tonight, but it’s too late for that now. It’ll be tomorrow morning, after someone from the mental health team has seen him.’
‘The mental health team? What’s wrong with him?’
‘Flora, calm down,’ Nan said. ‘They’re just ruling things out. It’s probably a urinary infection. Come over tomorrow. I’ll meet you at home and we can talk.’ The Swimming Pavilion: home. They both still called it that, although neither lived there now.
‘I want to see him.’
‘You will, in the morning. Make sure you check the bus timetable for the ferry. Don’t get stuck like last time.’
Flora had forgotten her sister’s irritating habit of thinking of everything that anyone might require.
When they had said goodbye, Flora put her phone on the side of the sink and brushed her teeth. As she turned to go, she knocked her mobile and it fell into the toilet with a plop.
The light was on in the main room – kitchen, bedroom and sitting room – but Richard, who must have got up, was now back under the covers with his eyes closed. The dirty plates had gone from the floor and were stacked on the table, the remains of the food scraped into the bin. In her food cupboard Flora found a packet of curry-flavoured savoury rice and dropped her phone inside. She sat on the sofa, trying to imagine her father broken and bruised in a hospital bed, but she could only see him wiry and brown, striding beside her over the heath, or showing her another book he’d found. She thought about her mother walking around Hadleigh right now, or sitting in a shop or a pub or a cafe. It made her hands shake and the creature in her stomach flip over. And then she realized that her mother wouldn’t be in any of those places; she would be waiting for them at home.
Flora watched Richard sleeping. There was no noise of wind or rain in the main room. The ceiling bulb shone full on his face and he looked different without his glasses, not just younger, but blanker, more unformed. She kneeled beside the bed and scrabbled underneath it for her suitcase.
‘Who was that?’ Richard said, opening one eye.
‘No one,’ Flora said, tugging at what she hoped was a handle.
‘Why are you wearing that? Isn’t it a tablecloth? You must be bloody freezing. Come back to bed.’ He lifted up the duvet to reveal his torso.
‘Oh,’ she said, ‘I’d forgotten about that.’
‘What?’ Richard craned his neck forward to stare down at his own body. He clawed with his free hand on the shelf below the bedside table and brought up his glasses. When he put them on, he gasped in mock surprise. Between the brown hairs that covered his chest and flowed from his belly button was an anatomical drawing of his insides – ribs, sternum, clavicle and the start of his pelvis, the wrapped snake of his intestines – all in indelible black felt-tip. ‘You have to come back to bed.’ He leaned over to pull her towards him. ‘I don’t have any arms or legs yet. You need to finish your drawing or I can’t go back to work.’ He smiled.
‘Did you know it’s nine thirty?’ Flora said, giving another yank on the suitcase handle and toppling backwards on to the carpet.
‘Nine thirty? In the morning?’ Richard dropped the duvet.
‘No, in the bloody evening,’ Flora said.
Richard reached out again for the shelf below the bedside table. This time he brought up his phone plugged into his charger, and Flora felt a flash of irritation not only that he had remembered to charge it but that he had been sensible enough to put it somewhere safe.
He gave a long whistle. ‘Nine thirty. Maybe it’s nine thirty tomorrow and we missed the whole of Saturday. Work is going to be really pissed off with me.’
Flora gave up on the suitcase, went to the drawer where she kept her underwear, and rooted through it.
‘Is everything all right?’ He sat up in bed to watch her.
‘It was Nan,’ Flora said. ‘On the phone.’
‘Your grandmother?’
‘Nanette. My sister.’
‘I didn’t know you had a sister. Older or younger?’
‘Five and a half years older,’ Flora said. She dumped a handful of knickers and bras in the middle of the floor. She returned to the chest of drawers to go through her jeans and jumpers.
‘What did she want?’
‘I have to go home.’
‘Right now? As in, this instant?’
‘Yes, right now,’ she said as she dropped another pile of clothes on the first and turned to him. ‘As in, immediately. Daddy’s been taken to hospital, and I need you to get up, so I can get my suitcase from under the bed.’
‘Daddy?’ Richard said.
‘Yes. Gil, my father. Do you have to repeat everything I say?’ Flora stood with her fists on her hips. Richard got out of the bed, found his pants and jeans, and pulled them on. He bent to get her suitcase, and sat on the side of the bed, watching her pack. The case had belonged to her mother and was made of blue cardboard with rounded corners. Flora was facing away from him, but she could feel Richard’s mind working.
‘Hang on,’ he said. ‘Gil? Your father’s called Gil? And isn’t your surname Coleman?’
Flora sighed. She hadn’t realized he knew her surname. It had taken a little less than two weeks for Richard to work it out. That wasn’t bad; once, she had discovered that a boy had only slept with her after he had found out who her father was. She never returned his calls.
‘That Gil Coleman?’ Richard said. ‘The Gil Coleman who wrote A Man of Pleasure?’ She knew without turning around what the expression on his face would be, and that was why, she reminded herself, she must never sleep with a bookshop assistant again.
‘That’s the one,’ Flora said, pressing sketchbooks and a box of charcoal on top of her clothes.
‘My God. Gil Coleman is your father. I can’t believe it. I thought he was dead. He hasn’t written anything else since that book, has he?’
‘I expect you think it’s all a bit I Capture the Castle.’ Flora tried to laugh it off. But looking at Richard from where she sat on top of the case, trying to lock it, she could see he had remembered that there was something else; another thing that was memorable about Gil Coleman apart from the book he had written. It was coming and it was best to get it over with, and then she could leave and not see Richard again. The suitcase clicked shut.
‘Wait,’ he said, sitting up straight, with one hand on his forehead and the other in the air, as if she had been doing something to stop him thinking. ‘Wait, I know this story.’
‘It isn’t a story, Richard. It’s my family.’
‘No, of course, sorry.’ He was still trying to remember when she turned away from him and dropped the tablecloth around her feet. She opened the case again, took out a clean pair of knickers and pulled them on. She found her jeans, sniffed the crotch and stepped into them. She didn’t look at Richard, because she couldn’t bear to see the dawning of that little piece of knowledge.
Flora picked up a bra, tried to hook it together, missed the catches, tried again, and heard him say a short, embarrassed ‘Oh’. When the bra caught, she squatted beside the bed and fought her way into a T-shirt that had been lying there. Richard leaned forward and gently took hold of her wrist. The black shoulder socket she had drawn on him flexed as his arm moved, and he said, ‘I’m sorry. About your mother.’
‘There’s nothing to be sorry about,’ Flora said brightly. ‘She might not be dead.’
‘But,’ Richard said, ‘I thought she –’
‘The newspapers,’ Flora spoke over him, ‘got it wrong.’
‘– drowned . . . a long time ago,’ Richard finished.
‘I . . .’ Flora started. ‘She’s lost, that’s all.’ The coconut smell and the golden honey colour came again, her mother turning in sunlight. ‘We don’t know what happened. And it was eleven years ago. But now she’s back. Daddy saw her in Hadleigh.’ Flora couldn’t hide her excitement.
‘What?’ Richard still had hold of her wrist.
‘I can’t go into it now. I just have to get home. He needs me.’ She sat on the floor beside him. She knew she wouldn’t see Richard again, because he would look at her differently now he had learned who she was. She hated it when her parents became the thing men found most interesting about her.
‘Let me drive you.’ His hand slipped from her wrist and now held her fingers. ‘Is Hadleigh where your father lives?’
‘Nearby. I’ll get the last train, it’s no problem. You probably need to get back too.’ She was aware of the change in his posture at these words, a realization of what she might mean.
‘When does it go?’ Richard stood up, pressed his phone.
‘About ten, I think.’
‘That’s in fifteen minutes. Flora, you won’t make it. Take my car.’
The Swimming Pavilion, 2nd June 1992
Dear Gil,
It’s four in the morning and I can’t sleep. I found a pad of this yellow paper and I thought I’d write you a letter. A letter putting down all the things I haven’t been able to say in person – the truth about our marriage from the beginning. I’m sure I’ll write things you’ll claim I imagined, dreamt, made up, but this is how I see it. This, here, is my truth.
If I asked, could you say when we first met?
I can tell you. It was the 6th of April 1976, although I’m being easy-going with the word ‘met’. It was a Tuesday. Sunny and warm, with an excitement that spring had arrived and was going to stay. Louise and I had been sitting on the lawn outside the university library, ignoring the notices to keep off the grass, and talking about what we were going to do with the rest of our lives. Of course, neither of us knew what it would be, but we both agreed it would be different from our mothers’ lives (keeping house, looking after children, not working), which we dismissed as parochial and pointless.
‘I’m not worried about having money,’ Louise said.
‘Or things,’ I said.
‘God, no. Things – children, husbands, houses, men – just tie you down. Stop you doing what you want to do. It’s all about education now. That was the problem with our mothers – no education. No degree. What use were they to anyone?’
‘No use at all,’ I said. (We were so critical, so uncompromising.) I lay back on the grass. ‘But I’d like to keep having sex. Now and again.’
‘Of course. We can have as much as we want when we’re away. No strings. No commitment. They have it, why shouldn’t we?’
By ‘they’, Louise meant ‘men’.
When we finished university, Louise and I were going to see what the world had to offer (places, people, and – inconsistently – men of course). We spent our evenings studying maps of South America, Australia, China, tracing routes, making plans and drinking cheap red wine.
That afternoon, Louise went to her history class and I went to fetch my bicycle from the racks. There, I found a note tucked between the brake cable and the handlebars of the man’s bike I’d bought from a fellow student. The note, which was folded in four, said (I memorized it): ‘Sir, in future, please be more careful when locking your bicycle. You appear to have attached yours to mine and now I have to walk home in the rain without an umbrella.’
The day was sunny, remember? The words had been written in pencil and in some places the point had gone through the paper as if the writer had rested it on a trousered knee. There wasn’t a signature.
I glanced around, tucked the note into my pocket, put a clip around one leg of my jeans and unlocked the bikes. I picked a daffodil from a nearby flowerbed, threaded it through the spokes of the bike next to mine and rode home. The next day another note had been tucked under the brake wires, although I’d propped my bike in a different spot. This one, in the same handwriting, made me laugh: ‘You shouldn’t pick the university’s flowers,’ it said. ‘The bigwigs won’t like it, and, no doubt, were the Dean to hear, you’d have to sit through one of his interminable speeches about university standards. I can assure you, it’s not worth it, however beautiful the flower and welcome the gesture.’
After supper with Louise, I lay on my bed in the flat. I should’ve been working on an English paper, but started cutting up a yellow envelope which I’d lifted from the wastepaper basket. I shaped daffodil petals from it and glued them to a pencil, and when it was finished I laid the flower on my bedside table. It was the last thing I saw before I switched off the light. The next morning I tucked the home-made daffodil between the handlebars and the brake cable of the note-writer’s bike. The bike was gone when I returned that afternoon, and the flower with it.
Then it was Easter, and I convinced my aunt on a crackling telephone line to Oslo that since my rent had been paid for the whole year, I may as well stay on in London. Every morning during the holidays, Louise and I cycled north through Regent’s Park to the swimming ponds at Hampstead Heath, no matter the weather. We took hard-boiled eggs and Ritz crackers, towels and swimming costumes. Louise always wanted to go to the ladies-only pond and although it was further and I’d have been happy to take my chances in the mixed pond, I didn’t argue because it was the water I went for: the chill of it as I lowered myself from the ladder, the verdigris hue of my legs as they kicked, the coot’s-eye view of the pond as I swam, with the insects hovering and the sunbeams refracting and reflecting, or rain speckling the surface. I liked the slap of the water against the boards of the wooden jetty, the distant laughter and shouts of other swimmers, and how, if I ducked down, I could open my eyes into a secret underwater world of weeds, mud, bubbles and the quick flashes of other swimmers’ limbs. I was disappointed that, unlike the men in their pond, in the ladies-only we were forbidden to swim naked.
When summer term started, so did the creative-writing module I’d signed up for, and in that first session we were still chattering at our desks when you came in. You put down your bag and leaned back on the lecturer’s table at the front of the room and crossed your ankles until one by one we noticed you and stopped talking. You looked young for thirty-nine, and handsome. On the blackboard behind you was a pie chart showing the chemical composition of seawater.
The first thing you ever said to me was ‘What’s your name?’ I remember thinking that your voice had been made for bedtime radio. The second thing you ever said to me was, ‘Ingrid Torgensen, please would you lock the classroom door.’
I shuffled on my chair and glanced at my neighbour, who gave an embarrassed laugh.
‘Well, come on. What’s the worst that could happen?’
I hesitated another moment, then went to the door and put my hand on the locking catch. Behind me there was talk and laughter as you directed the class to push the tables and chairs to the side of the room. I looked over my shoulder and saw you unpacking your bag. You took out an object wrapped in tissue paper and unrolled it from its covering – an empty jam jar. It was 1976, remember, we were young and ready for something new, excited by possibility. You placed the jar on the carpet, then sat cross-legged while you took out something else, also in tissue paper, and unwrapped it as if it was a precious thing. One by one the other students sat in a circle. You bent over the jam jar and inside it you put my home-made daffodil. The door lock turned under my fingers.
‘I’m going to tell a secret,’ you said when I’d edged into a gap in the circle and sat down too. ‘And afterwards it’ll be your turn. Something you’ve never told anyone before. Something you’ve always been hiding.’ You stared at the daffodil, your words slowed and quietened, and we leaned forward to catch them. ‘Secret truths,’ you said, ‘are the lifeblood of a writer. Your memories and your own secrets. Forget plot, character, structure; if you’re going to call yourself a writer, you need to stick your hand in the mire up to the wrist, the elbow, the shoulder and drag out your darkest, most private truth.’ You came forward and squatted on the floor in front of us.
‘I didn’t make that daffodil,’ you said, nodding towards it. A couple of the petals had come off and the others were bent. I could feel the pump of blood around my body, the flush of heat up through my neck, to my cheeks.
‘I stole it,’ you continued. ‘When I wasn’t much older than some of you, my mother became very ill. She was rushed into hospital and my father telephoned and told me to come immediately because she wouldn’t last the day. I lived a long way from the hospital and so I left what I was doing – writing or reading, perhaps – and jumped in my car. I had a distance to go, hours of driving, and I went fast without stopping, thinking about my mother, who I was very close to, in her hospital bed. I arrived in the early evening, parked the car haphazardly and ran in.
‘My mother was an old-fashioned woman. She had rules of behaviour that had to be followed, an etiquette that we’ve almost forgotten now, and as I rushed into the building, even on her deathbed I knew my mother would want it done properly. I couldn’t turn up without a gift or some flowers, but the small hospital shop was closed.
‘So I went into the first ward I came to: a children’s ward. No one questioned who I was or what I was doing there. I’d hoped to find a bunch of flowers or some chocolates that I could take, telling myself I’d replace them as soon as the shop opened, but of course no one brings flowers or boxes of chocolates to ill children. Just as I was thinking I would have to go to my mother without taking anything, I saw a home-made daffodil alone in a vase on a bedside table.’ You nodded towards the flower. ‘The child in the bed was asleep and he had no visitors, so I took the flower and found my way to my mother’s room. We said our goodbyes and she died a few minutes after I gave it to her.’
We were silent, watching you, watching the daffodil. One of the girls opposite me sniffed and wiped her eyes. And what did I think? Your story sounded so true, so heartfelt, that I nearly found myself believing it and questioning whether it was the same daffodil. It took me a long time to work out the truth from the fiction.
I don’t remember what secrets my fellow students offered up in that lesson – none of them has stuck with me. All that remains is the stunned silence when we picked up our bags and coats to leave. I gave you no secrets; I didn’t stick my arm in the mire during that class or any other. It was much later that I made up a story for you. That afternoon, when I told Louise about the lesson, she said, ‘That man’s an idiot, you should stay away from him.’
Gil, we miss you, please come home.
Yours,
Ingrid
PS: Whatever happened to your bicycle?
Richard’s Morris Minor was the only car on the last ferry. Before Flora set off, he had given complicated instructions about how much choke she needed to get ‘the old girl’ started, how the clutch was a ‘little sticky’, and how Flora mustn’t put the car into first gear when it was rolling or she might break a tooth. Flora imagined one of her canines cracking and splitting up the middle. But the car was pretty and smelled of raspberry-coloured warm plastic, even if it wasn’t practical.
The ferryman, wearing fluorescent yellow oilskins, waved Flora on and told her they were closing the service because of the bad weather.
‘High winds, my love,’ was what he actually said.
‘But my sister is coming across tonight,’ Flora shouted through the small gap she had wound in the car window, although now she couldn’t remember what Nan had said about when she was coming home, and Flora thought perhaps she should have gone to the hospital after all.
‘Not tonight she isn’t. She’ll have to go the long way round. Got your handbrake on?’
Flora got out of the car, although the ferry only took ten minutes to cross The Pinch, to the curl of land shaped like a beckoning finger where she had grown up. She stood at the front barrier, pelted by slanting rain while the engine strained and vibrated as it pulled the ferry across the short stretch of water on its chains. Flora’s stomach pitched and rolled with the boat. This night there were no lights on the opposite bank and they might have been sailing out to sea. She had never been the last passenger – the only passenger – and she wondered whether her mother had recently stood here to cross The Pinch, and whether they would recognize each other when they met. As the boat juddered and struggled, Flora imagined each clank was the chains snapping, setting the little car ferry free to follow the rushing tide. The waves would roar over the ramp until the car deck was awash and the water flowed through the gap in the window of Richard’s Morris Minor. She would climb the ferry’s steps to the viewing platform and lean over the railings as the boat listed and its lights were extinguished one by one, until the last, beside the navigation station, stuttered and was swallowed by the sea. Black waves would lift the boat up and roll it with the swell, like mountains rising where there had been no mountains before. The air would escape from each of the cavities and pipes and human lungs, and bubble to the surface, while the ferry up-ended, nose first into the water, and she and Richard’s little car and all the yellow-jacketed men would sink to the bottom.
It took two or three goes for Flora to start the car while the man waited impatiently on the ramp. He took a couple of steps towards her, but Flora swore, pulled the choke out, and with a jerk the car started and kept on going. The tollbooths on the road were unlit and the barriers were up: a free ride. The car’s headlights appeared to be weaker than when she had set off, and the rain drummed on the thin roof. The wipers were unable to cut through the blur fast enough, so Flora leaned forward over the steering wheel to where the dim beams showed the road disappearing in black and white. Even with the heater going full blast, every few minutes she had to swipe the windscreen with the side of her arm.
The road from the ferry to the village cut through a nature reserve: salty wetlands criss-crossed with tracks, swampy in the hollows, rising to dusty dunes near the sea, and rocky outcrops inland. The sandy trails sliced through fields of marram grass and heather, skirted Little Sea Pond, a brackish lake lying low between the road and the sea, and passed by stands of wind-humped trees huddled together for protection.
Darkness didn’t stop Flora from knowing every bend and sway of Ferry Road although she had never driven it, had always been the passenger, either in the front, beside her sister, or in the back when they were children, in her father’s car. She had been almost ten when her mother had disappeared, and Flora couldn’t remember ever having been in a car with her, although that must have happened. She fiddled with the radio, sliding the dial, but only got static and an occasional faraway voice.
The first bump on the car roof came when she must have been passing the Agglestone, a massive rock eroded into the shape of a boxer’s head, its broken nose flattened by the wind. It rested on a hill to her right, although there was no view of it through the misted windows. She wasn’t even certain she had heard anything over the throaty noise of the engine, and the rain. Then something hit the windscreen and was swooshed away by the wipers. Flora reared back in her seat, hands gripping the thin steering wheel, her foot pressing the brake. The car slid across the wet surface to the other side of the road, and she tried to remember if she was meant to turn into a skid or away from it. Something else fell on to the bonnet and seemed to throw itself into the road, and then another, and another. The car came to a halt, stalling with one back tyre in the sandy verge and the rest on the tarmac. The gorse and hawthorn bushes pressed up against the side window as if shading their eyes to gaze in.
Flora peered forward and rubbed at the glass with her fist. The short beams thrown out by the headlights revealed objects falling and bouncing on to the road. When they stopped and she was sure the drumming on the roof was only the rain, she lifted herself over the handbrake and into the passenger seat, and opened the door. The wind in the pines was a roar, and the rain slammed against the road. Without stepping down, she saw on the slick black tarmac a fish lying on its side with its mouth open. It was the size of her palm and shone with a silvery-blue iridescence. She stuck her left foot out to flip the thing over, and even in the rain she saw that the underside was lacerated, crushed when it had hit the ground. Shielding her eyes, Flora looked in the direction of the fading headlights: hundreds of the creatures lay across the road, a handful flapping feebly. They may have been baby mackerel. The wind pulled at the open door and Flora yanked it shut, climbed back over to the driver’s seat and sat staring. She wasn’t sure she could bear to drive forward. She closed her eyes and turned the ignition. The engine clunked and wheezed twice, and when she tried it again it produced an old man’s cough, slow, painful and phlegmy. She pulled the choke out, although Richard had said she wouldn’t need it when the engine was warm, but this time the car wouldn’t start, and on the fourth try the headlights went out and she was sitting in the dark.
She looked over her shoulder again; perhaps the man had been wrong about the ferry, maybe it would return once more before they closed it, but there was only the night behind her. She waited for another five minutes and tried the ignition again, but now the clunk sounded deadly. She took her suitcase and satchel from the back seat, and once more shuffled over and out of the car.
The Swimming Pavilion, 4th June 1992, 3.55 a.m.
Dear Gil,
Of course I couldn’t write the story of a marriage in one letter. It was always going to take longer.
After I finished my first letter I meant to send it straight away. I found an envelope from an old electricity bill in the kitchen-table drawer, and thought I’d walk to the postbox as the sun came up before I could change my mind. But as I perched on the arm of the sofa in the dark with the pen in my hand, there was a noise from the girls’ room (the squeak of bedsprings, the creak of the door), and without thinking I grabbed a book from the nearest shelf, shoved the letter inside and pushed it back into place.
Flora stood in the doorway, the sunrise coming through the windows of our bedroom, silhouetting her skinny nine-year-old body in a nightdress.
‘Is it morning?’ she said.
‘No, Flora,’ I said. ‘Go back to bed.’
‘Has Daddy come home?’
‘No,’ I said. ‘Not yet.’
I put the first letter I wrote to you inside The Swimming-Pool Library by Alan Hollinghurst. Appropriate, for all sorts of reasons. I’ve been thinking that I’ll leave all my letters in your books. Perhaps you’ll never find them, maybe they’ll never be read. I can live with that.
So, 1976. We, the chosen four, sat in your tiny office, high up in a corner of a sixties block of whitewashed corridors, lecture rooms, thin carpets on concrete floors, strip-lighting, and metal-framed windows that let in the cold. Apart from the narrow desk overflowing with paper, you’d made your office into a cramped version of a gentleman’s club: rugs, lamps, book-lined walls, an old leather chesterfield and low armchairs crammed around a buttoned footstool. The room had a smell – of coffee, warm upholstery and tobacco – a smell I loved to inhale, a grown-up’s space. You wore a black ribbed cardigan zipped up to your chin, and you reclined in your usual chair.
‘Last six lines of the final chapter,’ you said, and we scrabbled for our books, found the page and stared at it. You recited them aloud, from memory. ‘So what effect do they have?’ you asked.
Moments passed until reliable Brian spoke up.
‘Jackson’s letting us know that Merricat has grown more robust. She’s no longer afraid of the village children – in fact, she might even eat one. Whereas Constance has become even more dependent on her sister and most likely will never leave the house again.’
‘But what do you think?’ you said, slurping your coffee and resting the cup against your chin. Brian, looking confused, caught my eye but I shrugged. We were silent for at least a minute.
‘Well,’ Brian said. ‘That is what I think.’
You sighed. ‘What about you, Elizabeth?’ You relaxed into the velvet armchair, the padded arms shiny with wear and the white stuffing coming out of the ends, like a man in a smoking jacket who has tucked his hands inside his shirt cuffs for a joke.
‘I . . .’ she started, clearly unsure and trying to feel around for the answer you wanted. ‘I, I think, with the spiders Jackson’s telling us that Constance covered up for Merricat . . .’ Elizabeth paused, waiting for an indication that she was on the right track. ‘Because, you know at the tea party, when what’s his name, the uncle, says that Constance cleaned out the sugar bowl, because, you know, that’s where the arsenic was, but the uncle, whatever he’s called, said there was a spider in it.’ You stretched out your legs and let her talk until she wound down and came to a stop. Even I was embarrassed for her.
‘So?’ you said, drawing out the word. We were silent. ‘How do you interpret that?’ You plonked your cup on a sheaf of papers beside you on the desk. The top page was upside down from where I sat and I couldn’t read it. ‘Come on, people.’ Despairing of us, you ran your hands through your hair, brown, but receding, leaving a promontory of curl to flop across your forehead.
‘Guy,’ you said. ‘Help your friends out.’ I was never sure why you had included Guy in our group of four. I thought he was the weakest writer, someone who liked to string long words together for the sake of it. I’d been sleeping with Guy on and off for the previous year. Off more than on, because although the sex was good, my body disturbed him. One time he’d told me it was like ‘doing it’ with a weird deep-sea creature, and also he talked too much and I was tired of listening.
While Guy gave his bombastic speech about what he thought of Jackson’s intentions, I reduced the volume and tried to think of something to say when it came to my turn. Something that would make you sit up in your overstuffed chair and nod in agreement, something you hadn’t even thought of yourself. I had no ideas. Not even a theory we could argue. Really, nothing. When Guy had finished talking, and while my heart was leaping in my throat at the horror of my empty mind, you stretched your arms up behind your head and yawned. It was a yawn so loud and so lengthy that we looked away. Once your mouth finally closed, you leaned forward and rubbed your eyes with the heels of your hands. When you took them away, the whites had a pinkish tint. I don’t know how much you’d drunk the night before, but the fumes were radiating off you.
I waited with nervous anticipation for you to ask my opinion. You didn’t even turn towards me.
‘Look,’ you said. ‘Some of you, especially those tortured souls who like to think they’re poets’ – here you stared at Guy, who frowned back at you – ‘might fantasize about the idea of scribbling away in your garret, unappreciated by the literary world until you’re in your grave. But there really is no fucking point. Writing does not exist unless there is someone to read it, and each reader will take something different from a novel, from a chapter, from a line. Have none of you read Barthes or Rosenblatt?’ (We scribbled down the names.) ‘A book becomes a living thing only when it interacts with a reader. What do you think happens in the gaps, the unsaid things, everything you don’t write? The reader fills them from their own imagination. But does each reader fill them how you want, or in the same way? Of course not. I asked you what effect those lines have, and you’ve all described what you think Jackson intended, what the lines do, or at least what you believe they do. In some cases you’ve most certainly got even that wrong.’ You glanced again at Guy. ‘But none of you told me what effect they have on you. What they made you, the reader, imagine in here.’ You thumped your chest. ‘You’ve missed the very essence of literature and reading. Who gives a fuck about Jackson and her intentions? She’s dead, literally and metaphorically. This book’ – you snatched Elizabeth’s copy from her lap and flapped it in the air – ‘and all books are created by the reader. And if you haven’t realized that and what it means to your own work, you know shit-all about writing and you’re never going to, so you might as well stop now.’
It was as if I were in my father’s flat again, cowering at one of his rants about his ex-wife, my mother. Guilty by association. You leaned back once more, stretched your legs, and arching your spine put your hands behind your head and closed your eyes, as if you were reclining in a deckchair on a Sunday afternoon. I watched in fascination as your cardigan rose above the waistband of your jeans and a strip of flat stomach appeared; you weren’t wearing anything underneath, and when I looked at your feet you didn’t have any socks on either. You must have slept on the sofa, had likely still been asleep when Brian, always the first to arrive, had knocked on your office door at two in the afternoon.
‘Yep,’ you said with your eyes still closed. ‘You can stop now. Go on, get out.’
Brian, sitting on the sofa beside Elizabeth, made a noise, a tiny clearing of his throat, but the rest of us just sat.
‘Go on, fuck off now,’ you said. For a short while more we waited, but you didn’t move and I wondered if you’d fallen asleep. We gathered our notes, our copies of the novel with pages marked by slips of paper, our bags, our pens and pencils; all of us keeping a wary eye on you in case you jumped up and shouted, ‘Where are you going? We’ve still got work to do!’ But you remained in the same position in the armchair while I and my fellow students shuffled around each other like a sliding tile puzzle, one of us sitting so another could stand, Elizabeth pressing herself into your desk so Guy could squeeze past. I was the last in the queue to get to the door, Elizabeth disappearing in front of me down the corridor.
‘Ingrid!’ you shouted, and I jumped, turning towards the room. You were sitting up. ‘Have a look at this.’ In one movement you tilted sideways, plucked a book from a low shelf and threw it at me. It came spinning end over end and I dropped my bag to catch it, slapping the covers between my palms to stop it just short of the bridge of my nose. ‘Let me know what you think,’ you said, and returned to your previous position, arms behind your head, legs out and eyes shut. I was dismissed.
Come back to us, Gil.
Yours always,
Ingrid
[Placed in We Have Always Lived in the Castle by Shirley Jackson, 1962]
Even with her head bent against the wind and the rain, Flora recognized her route through the heath. Seven years ago, the summer she turned fifteen, she had lain in a dip in the sand near this path and these woods, with her eyes and legs open beneath a boy called Cooper.
A group of teenagers – villagers and holidaymakers – would gather in the dunes if the evening was dry and light a bonfire in the sand. One night Cooper had offered Flora a drag on his cigarette and a sip of his beer, and had looked at her expectantly, waiting to see what she would offer in return. She had led him through the sandy paths of the heath to the woods at the far end of Little Sea Pond and pressed him into the muscled trunk of a hornbeam. She hadn’t kissed a boy before and wasn’t sure whether she enjoyed the feeling of his tongue in her mouth. She imagined withdrawing her face and him still standing there with his eyes closed and his tongue out. Flora knew no one cared where she was, not her father, who would be in the pub, and not Nan on another maternity-ward placement, who had left two plates of dinner in the fridge: a lake of stew separated from the peas by a wall of mashed potato.
After the kiss, on their walk back to the bonfire, Cooper said, ‘Will you be around tomorrow?’
‘Maybe,’ Flora said.
The next evening they left the fire early and returned to the tree which bent its spine to the wind and crouched protectively over a sandy hollow.
Flora couldn’t now bring Cooper’s face to mind and she had never learned his first name, but she recalled the way the silhouetted leaves and thin branches of the hornbeam had swayed against the night sky. They didn’t talk much, but there was a full moon and Flora had brought a sketchbook. She made Cooper take off his jumper and T-shirt, although he complained the night was cold, and had him rest against the tree trunk so she could draw him. She tried to look hard and not make assumptions about what was in front of her, like her art teacher had taught her, and although what she drew didn’t resemble Cooper, when she had finished she liked how his face blended into the bark of the tree. Afterwards he undid his trousers and she lay back in the sand. She imagined Cooper as a faun or satyr with the legs and cloven hooves of a goat; a half-animal performing an act which came from somewhere deeper than his limited ability with conversation and his love of poorly drawn tattoos. She liked to create a picture of the two of them in her head, how they would appear to a bird or someone sitting in the top of the tree: their bodies merging and blending in the moonlight. She put up with roots digging into her spine as the boy became lost in his own rhythm and finished with two or three jerks that ran through the whole of his body.
Flora went on the pill, and she and Cooper visited the tree many times that summer, while she learned what her body was capable of and what she liked. But it was the drawings and the afterwards time she mostly did it for; when he held her and kissed her quietly, his weight still heavy, until they both felt her body ejecting the soft wetness of his.
‘Chucked me out of the disco,’ Cooper would say and roll off. Then he would hitch up his trousers and lie on his back beside her, their fingers entwined. Sometimes they shared a cigarette; other times he fell asleep and his fingers would go slack.
On the last night before Cooper was due to go home – to a northern city and with nothing said about love or keeping in touch or meeting the following summer – while he moved on top of her, Flora gazed upwards, watching the branches of the hornbeam slice the moon like a pie. Later that night she returned to the tree with a penknife, and to leave her mark on an object that would still be there long after she’d gone, Flora cut a nick in the trunk and pushed a human tooth into the gap, one of half a dozen she kept in an old cufflink box of her father’s.
Flora trekked up the final sand dune with a puff of effort; the suitcase and her satchel were heavy. The inky sea bled out before her, mixing with the sky at an indefinable point. The rain had stopped abruptly in the way that the weather along the coast could transform from hour to hour, and the only noise was the grate of the waves and the wind rattling the trees behind her. To her left, the beach curved away out of sight around to the ferry and The Pinch. While to the right, a concave mile of sand swept into indistinct shadow, backed by more dunes and then the car park. Beyond this were a few lights from the dozen houses, shop and pub that were Spanish Green, the village where Flora had grown up. In the distance a chalky cliff rose to mark the edge of Barrow Down. But in front of her right now was the nudist beach, the place where her mother had disappeared. For the first time in nearly twelve years Flora stepped on to the sand where the sea was retreating. She took off her shoes and socks, tied her laces together, slung her shoes around her neck, and strode towards home in the shallow waves, trying to imagine who, if anyone, would be there to meet her.
The Swimming Pavilion, 4th June 1992, 5 a.m.
Dear Gil,
(I’ve been thinking about getting a dog. Flora would love it. A red setter or an Irish wolfhound – a big dog which would bark at the wind when I take it to the beach. I know you don’t like dogs. But you aren’t here.)
I took my time reading the book you’d lent me. I can’t remember the title now, but it was a terrible title and a terrible book, and I couldn’t work out why you’d given it to me. I worried I was missing something. While I cycled to the university and home again I composed sentences in my head, sentences which were positive or at least constructive, but I couldn’t find anything to redeem the book. I studied the parts you’d highlighted – the sex scenes you’d underlined and your margin notes – trying to analyse what you meant and blushing at your crude drawings. A few weeks passed, I went to several of your classes, and each time I hung around at the end, putting my coat on slowly, taking my time to pack my bag, hoping you’d ask me about the book, and although I was always the last student to leave, you never called my name, never asked me to stay behind.